E-Portfolio Writing Term 1

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

Welcome to my amazing animal filled plane you can get in your seat with adjustable functions the polar pilot explained he said something else but I don't remember the polar pilot said .I sat in my seat when a strange opera  came on meerkats popped out of the seat in front of me and started to tango?"what!" I said in a yelling voice something is wrong with this plane STOMP STOMP "ahhh!" I yelled like a monkey without bananas, but of course there are monkeys on this plane. slurp slurp a giraffe started licking my foot .Well I think this is the most normal thing on this plane !BANG! oh my gosh what was that noise! I screamed in my head sloths that is the worst job for sloths unloading bags and we are NZ I thought they were in south Africa. "excuse me can I have a drink of water". sure the koala said. when I took my fist sip. "Eww what is this I'll have peanuts instead." He came back with a bag of Peanuts when I took my first crunch of my Peanuts and announcement came on. It said we are now landing you can collect your bags at the lobby. By the time we landed my family was waiting at the gate they asked me about my flight " how was it " great maybe we can go on it all together one time they give amazing foot massages.